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| | Introducing Webby | |
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Webby

Posts : 9 Join date : 2017-11-29
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 | Subject: Introducing Webby Wed Nov 29 2017, 23:43 | |
| Name: Webby Age: 30 Race: Human Gender: Male Karma: Neuatral Faction: Wildcard Reputation: SPECIAL: • Strength: 5 • Perception: 10 • Endurance: 5 • Charisma: 5 • Intelligence: 10 • Agility: 2 • Luck: 3 Level: Perks: 1.Redneck: You get a +10 to all dice rolls related to attacking with revolvers, pistols, shotguns and rifles. 2.Resourceful: Level 1: You get a 10% bonus to all Exp earned. Height: 5 feet 4 inches Weight: 150ibs Body type: Thin. Hair style: Military under cut, brown hair with grey in it. Eyes: Blue eyes, anglo styled. Skin color: Clean white skin. Other: Has a beard like a bush ranger, its is ginger with grey mixed in. Image: maybe later. Psychical Description: will do what it takes to survive with zero regard to ethics. Likes to play fair and has a sense of honour but will also cheat if that is what it takes, as far as he is concerned better to win and feel bad than to lose and feel bad. Inventory:
- Main Weapon: Aug
- Secondary Weapon: Spork
- Helmet: black berret
- Mask:
- Goggles: Aviator sunglasses
- Clothes: yowie suit
- Armor:
- Backpack: standard issue pack
- First Accessory: binoculars
- Second Accessory: first Aid kit
- Other: some Ammo and a shovel
Defect of the Character: Does not like to fight up close as his training was to avoid prolonged engagments and withdraw if the enemy got to close, lacks the strength to survive in extended meelee. Aspirations: Ultimate goal is to establish a community that can provide for its self and offer respite from the harder places on the island. Other details: Webby dislikes eating fish, Background story: Descended from Australian soldiers deployed to hawaii to help combat the communist threat in the pacific, Webby has always been used as a scout since he was old enough to wield his Aug. When Webby was 15 years old he fell asleep on guard duty under a bush, allowing a group of super mutants to walk straight into his family camp, it was a bloodbath-no survivors except for Webby who only survived due to it being dark and the bush covering his small frame. For 15 years with the death of his family weighing on his conscious he wandered from one place to the next, not really knowing what to do or where to go. Webby is 30 now and has made a few caps here and there scouting ahead for caravans and scavers, it doesn't pay well but he rarely has to fire his weapon and almost never ends up in a fight.
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|  | | Good Karma Admin

Posts : 28 Join date : 2017-11-29
 | Subject: Re: Introducing Webby Wed Nov 29 2017, 23:52 | |
| Interesting, would be perfect if the setting of this game was right after the bombs drop. The current year in the setting is 2327, So I dont think a human could have survived sense 2077! Maybe a race change to Ghoul would be better for you? Here is a link to Lore and Timeline of the setting if you want to read up: http://fallout-nukaloha.forumotion.com/f5-background-lore-and-timeline |
|  | | Webby

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 | Subject: Re: Introducing Webby Thu Nov 30 2017, 00:14 | |
| He is the descendent of the regiment, they exclusively bred between themselves originally the 3 Sqns A,B and C would breed with each other (to avoid inbreeding)but due to radiation (causing men to go sterile)and lack of females being born they began to die out untill only Webby was left. |
|  | | Bad Karma Admin

Posts : 116 Join date : 2017-11-29
 | Subject: Re: Introducing Webby Sun Dec 03 2017, 14:36 | |
| Okay, so, you can either choose the AUG or the pistol, you can't have both. The defects need to be legitimate flaws your character has, not their sense of humor. The psychichal description needs to be much more detailed. Is Webby's mission all he is? What does he love? What does he fear? What will he do after he completes his mission?
Also, you can have Webby's heritage in the backstory but you need to have his actual life in there as well, not just how a certain group of people came to be. |
|  | | Webby

Posts : 9 Join date : 2017-11-29
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 | Subject: Re: Introducing Webby Mon Dec 04 2017, 07:38 | |
| Ok fixed it up a bit I think, let me know if it needs more. |
|  | | Neutral Karma

Posts : 57 Join date : 2017-11-30
 | Subject: Re: Introducing Webby Mon Dec 04 2017, 17:26 | |
| I have an issue with your Psychical Description. You say he will do what it takes to survive with no regard to ethics, and likes to play fair and has a sense of honor... but will also cheat if that is what it takes to win. You are contradicting yourself. Playing fair and having a sense of honor means you have a belief in ethics. You list his defects as what the character excels at (and doesn't) in a combat situation, that is not what the question is asking. It is asking what the character, who is supposed to be a human being, has as flaws. The flaws in their personality, in particular. No human on this Earth is perfect. There are a variety of typos littered throughout this sheet. As an example, neuatral is incorrect, neutral is the correct way to spell the word. Proofreading your posts would be expected of you on the forum. Please revise your sheet accordingly, it won't be accepted in this state. If you want good examples of the type of sheets we are expecting, look at the other sheets we have approved. |
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